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Lesson To Be Re-Learned



My eyes weep
for humanity today,

compassion for one another
displaced-

and my heart bleeds
for fellow man
knows not
the meaning of
"Love one another"
      -OR-
"Do unto others as
you would have them do unto you"

Caring and helping
your fellow man,
is what we need
to re-learn...



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  • Desire gold member
    July 14

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Lesson To Be Re-Learned
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept shedding tears for I was envisioning a code pink-
    a baby in stress (not breathing)- how one would react, whether complain about working overtime to help revive this child or ready to head out the door- another typical day in the ER- When You mention: and my heart bleeds for fellow man- I am right beside You for it is painful to see-imagine a person neglected when Life hangs in the balance After reading Your words- I was envisioning You stepping forward and working to make a difference- show through action with do- instead of do nothing- I imagine how many lives are given second chances instead of final warnings- before the morgue door closed The last stanza grabs- so many do need to re-learn
    Excellent Voice spoken~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    July 4

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    AMEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I so agree...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    thanks for sharing this wonderful message!!!!!!!!!!!!
    and for being you...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    your awesome.....!