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Gluttony

With heaving curvaceous breast
I nibble yet again
savoring another sampling
of life's delights

I cannot help myself
I ache for chocolate
desire the ripe sweet fruits
their nectar  pleasing
cleansing my palatte
before the next course
succulent roast beast
of some sort
of all sorts

I just nibble
not large amounts of any one thing
making me pleasantly plump
softly curvy, well for now
mmmmm dessert my favorite
sweets and treats
just a nibble of each one
ok another nibble of each
mmmm I need ahhh
just a little more

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  • Charles Johnson
    July 6, 2008
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    oh makes me hungry. desire is so intense! i enjoyed it so.


  • Ethereal One gold member
    July 3, 2008

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    Your words tell how this person cannot control her appetite, and just keeps eating more and more. I enjoyed your expression in this poem.

    Thank you for entering the contest, and good luck!

    Ethereal One