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~ Wired ~ ( Bronze )

Scattering of petals,

floating in bubbles,

Sensual aroma,

Shared.

 

Day in the yard,

Created a picture card,

Of beauty,

Amongst a flowering bed.

 

Our tie',

Entwining,

within the barbs...

of love.

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Barbs_and_Roses_by_cosfrog

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  • michael thomas
    July 8
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    good flow of ideas. congratulations.


  • Weltt gold member
    July 8
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    Short, sweet, and sensual. bravo!


  • Swtpoetryman
    July 2

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    SWEET AND SENSUAL to say the least!

    A fine piece, Julie - and Thank You 'SO MUCH" for sharing it with me as I needed to read something as lovely as this today - as it has been a trying one, indeed - as most of me days - these days - seem to be at the factory - but now that I'm in me yard with me two yellow winged mates beside me I'm feeling rather sweet and sensual after having read this beautiful piece, meself!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Abe 1
    July 2

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    really luv it cause i see love blossomin in dis 1 very unique me friend ope it does well for ya its great
    abe


  • daviscth gold member
    July 2

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    I've said this before sissy, but it bears repeating. You are so good at this kind of prompt!!!!!!!!! Everything about it is wonderful and has a certain charm that only you could add. Good luck in the contest. Love you.


  • maralisa gold member
    July 2

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    wow julie this is so stuningly beautiful full of deep bonds of pure sensative harmony also has peaceful sensations colliding with natures visions at there best
    I just loved the following words of beauty
    Scattering of petals,floating in bubbles, Sensual aroma,Our tie',Entwining, good luck in the contest my friend x


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 2

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    Very very beautiful this piece is. Carried me away with it, to another place. Very very sensual, romantic ethereal feel to the piece.

    You caught the atmosphere well with this Julie. Could be a gold on the way here, methinks? [Raised eyebrow ]

    Darkest
    Love
    Wayne Leon
    x


  • Lil-Bit Crazy silver member
    July 2

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    oooooooooooooooooooooo sensual....... hehe great write here hun..... this is lovely..... thank you for sharing this and good luck in the contest.....!
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