Love;
Money;
Heart;
Soul;
Gave you everything,
You took it,
I don't care;
Keep it:
BITCH!
Author notes
DON’T BORE THE F**K OUT OF Me!
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A contest entry
- I'm a Bitch, I'm a Lover? by Poetic Obscenity.
1000 points, ended July 6, 2008, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 16 Words by theredcatjazzoflove.
600 points, ended July 7, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
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How true, how true. We manly men give our ladies everything: money, sex, our bodies, more sex, our unwashed socks etc etc. And what do they do? Ask for orgasms, the b*tches.
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very raunchy i lved it to death this is like totally my type of flames here i mean i really enjoyed this a lot you have heat thanks for sharing
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HAHAHA!!!
I freaking love it.
That's the shortest, simplest poem i've ever read and it's just simply great. hahaha.
=] Very bitchy, vengeful, in your face.
Wonderful.
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Dang.. Lol.. just a little intense and hateful..lol.. I love it! You did a wonderful job! made me laugh.. And thats rare, so kudos for you... Best of luck..
Angel
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always nice to make a lady laugh in a good way
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Ha! Not a good place to be. Trust me no matter how much you say you don't care a teeny part of you just wants to make someone suffer.
It felt like you were really careful to say it all in 16 words. The poem feels like it is bursting at it's seams and there's so much more you'd like to say. lol.
All the best.
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