Its passions breathless fire
expressed upon your face
your motions sensuality
that moves your
sexual wading pools still;
Like silent clear waters
lapping on my shore
your every look
and whispered breath
is enticements ravishing lure.
Stirring inveigled heat,
temptation on the rise
pressing into embracing arms
your liquid lovers mist
impale drenching depth.
Anticipation turns to lust
Moonlight glistens
on beaded waters breast
that sparkle with vibrations
of our bodies collisions thrust.
Our dreams wrap around our souls
while in your eyes
reality is more beautiful
than imaginations surreal
and ecstacy is everything we feel.
Author notes
Photo Prompt
In a list
A contest entry
- LOVERS by Whispering Wind.
750 points, ended July 15, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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O' my! how your tender words do take the breath away...an excellent read and niaish so much for sharing it with me and for entering
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THANKS
FOR YOUR KIND WORDS BEAUTIFUL WORDS FOR A BEAUTIFL LADY
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Beautifully Sensual
You write such beautifully soft sensual poems with moving imagery which sweeps ones imagination into your poem of dreams. The picture is just beautiful with the poem. I loved this part,
Our dreams wrap around our souls
while in your eyes
reality is more beautiful
than imaginations surreal
and ecstacy is everything we feel.
My dear sweet brother what a romantic sweet heart you are!!
Much Love
penelope
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Excellently penned. The lines flow as smooth as liquid water mixed with those beads of perspiration...all sensors working into ecstacy of more than just another moment but one to hold close in memory locked within the same heartbeat. HH you do sensual with th softness of knowing the definition of the word. good luck for this poem
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'Our dreams wrap around our souls
while in your eyes
reality is more beautiful
than imaginations surreal'
Beauty within her eyes, surrreal! Lovely lines here my friend! Pure Sexy...~Sie
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