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Dancing with Butterflies

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Dancing between worlds,
Gliding with indecision
Of which path to chose.
Beauty beyond description
as the scent of serenity captures
the mind and soul of the weary..
her heart is alive

beating slow & steady
just like the wings of a butterfly

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Credit: Selling_Dreams_by_LadyMarine

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  • paperparadox silver member
    August 9

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    Hood-Wink!

    Congratulations, dear Poet, on being ambushed by the Poetic Bandits! I truly hope this mass visitation brings a smile to your face and a renewed confidence to your writing.

    Nice depiction of the picture prompt here, and well done with the trophy. I like the alliteration towards the end of your poem. It works nicely with the overall theme of water and searching...

    Well done ~ it was a pleasure to stop by for a visit today... Keep that pen moving!


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 11

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    A sweet delicate poem
    The last stanza I really loved.
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes to you
    Julie


  • maralisa gold member
    July 10

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    as the scent of serenity captures the mind and soul of the weary..her heart is alive beating slow & steady
    just like the wings of a butterfly beautiful poem with beautiful images I am sure julie will love your words of love good luck in the contest