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The only kiss

We danced and drank and chatted all night long
Were not in love just friends with time to spare
The DJ called an end and played "That song"
And we were all alone, with no-one there

I kissed your lips, the slightest little touch
And felt your lips press harder onto mine
We wanted one another far too much
Your tongue and lips and tastes of cheap red wine

The song had ended, party cleared away
But no-one tried to break the friends apart
I do not know how long we kissed that day
I only know it came straight from my heart

    We never kissed again, nor ever will
    But I can feel your lips are on me still

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  • TwilightPanther gold member
    July 15

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    now that is what i would call a true kiss...breath to breath and lingers still..sighs...niaish so much for sharing this moment with me and for entering


  • parenchma
    July 12

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    Line 6. dropped "r"

    I was 16. Visiting some friends from school while folks were away. The girls got into the liquer cabinent. Ruth thought I was Richard Carpenter, and was in love...
    "Close to you" On the stereo. She couldn't zip her jeans after the loo, so I the gentleman discreetly assited. She may have loved Richard, but it was me she was kissing...

    I remember second hand Creme d'Menthe...

    She didna remember
    Explained it was only
    for fun

  • NeonRose silver member
    July 4
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    mmmmm, yummy! A beautifully crafted poem! Best to you in the contest!


  • PassionsPromise silver member
    July 2
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    Kiss me my dear and lets get lost in the trance.

    Love you

    Passions


  • The Painting Poet gold member
    July 2
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    Just goes to show a perfect kiss is never planned, it happens. Awesome write Jeff xxx


  • One Angry Monkey
    July 2

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    A very weet an gentle sonnet jeff. i'm sure you've already noticed but "that song" is laways going to be difficult to slip in there, why not "our song"?


    • cricketjeff gold member
      July 2
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      Because it wasn't "our song" it was the only time we kissed in all the years I knew her! Just happened

  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 2

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    Sigh...yes i do know how this feels and sadly how it ends too Love, C

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