Hidden beneath your soul
I saw the flowing colours of your warmth
holding inwardly the one thing I desired.
You gave me everything,
I had nothing left to call my own,
now all that I have is your's,
please;
Dont take it back!
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie; [Sensual] Picture Prompt # 2 by perfectsunset.
600 points, ended July 21, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nice write here. i like it's style and rhythm. the ending plea for the love not to take back their everything is gorgeous.
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nice
the kind of love we all wish for. One where there are no regrets it seems. Nice work young poet.
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wondeful
perfect for the pic, and lovely words penned here, thank you for sharing it with us!
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Wow. This was very beautiful. Incredible emotions. Great poem!
Write on.
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Beautiful Sentiments...
I love the imagery here; great artistry!! Wishing you all the best in the contest!! 
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Oh wow; this was deeply creative and beautifully expressed. Originally crafted!
Best of luck & thanks for entering
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