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in a low-slung moonful of promise

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blind edges
grow light
rumpled
magnolia dreams
migrate
on a zephyr
from a hole
in a thinly-sunned
dawn a dove drops
swollen notes

and coos
its heart out
as if to answer
the longing






~~~
(c) GINA 2 July 2008

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  • ardentMarch gold member
    July 17

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    this is so beautiful & sadly felt:

    "in a thinly-sunned
    dawn a dove drops
    swollen notes

    and coos
    its heart out
    as if to answer
    the longing"


    excellent poem & feelings communicated strongly here with strong imagery as well, I love this...