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Sunbathing

Perfect globe of dew
upon skin
of a single, tender leaf

basking now,
as one who had not known
the vastness of clouds

















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  • Luckintheshadows
    July 2

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    wow! so few words, and such a brilliant message. Those last 2 lines are just mindblowing! I love this.

    Thanks for sharing, and all the best in the contest,

    Luck.

  • Cupcrazy gold member
    July 2
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    This is perfectly stunning, such a thought provoking piece, I adore it. Hugs, Bunny


  • zochit2me gold member
    July 2

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    What beauty you have penned here. I don't even believe I need to look at the contest picture to get the jest of this. Wonderfully done and such great imagery!




    ☼Becky☼
    ♫♫♫♫♫♫


  • james119
    July 2

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    what a statement you make here!
    it's quite thought provoking.

    "as one who had not known
    the vastness of clouds"


    I like it

  • Cannonsfire silver member
    July 2
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    Sigh Love, C


  • AliceinPoetryLand Moderators member
    July 2

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    Just gorgeous! I lvoe the simplicity of this, which fits perfectly with the eimplicity of the photo.
    Thanks so much for your entryStunning!
    Gaylene
  • mikethepoet
    July 2
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    it is good enough for the picture i like it good luck in the contest
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