Softly the waterdrop falls bringing the leaf to life.
Uniting both as one, the leaf and the waterdrop combine.
One transparent, looking so pure and clear.
The other radiantly greeninsh, looking so beautiful and vivid.
Both representing life as it is meant to be
Both so delicate in their true nature representing reality.
Beauty is to be appreciated,
And such delicate sight should definately be reservated.
We should protect the innocence of the natural world
We should not litter and damage the face of what we should treasure the most.
A contest entry
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850 points, ended July 16, 2008, 13 entries
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"We should protect the innocence of the natural world
We should not litter and damage the face of what we should treasure the most." - Excellent conclusion!
I'm glad that you entered this poem.
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Thank you
Thank you for you comment and appreciation and happy u like it too..
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You call to the fore such an incredible truth! We so take our beautiful earth for granted, thoughtlessly damaging her.
I love this poem for the truth it speaks.
Just one thing you may/may not wish to change, in the third last line "innocense" should be "innocence" but really, such a minor little thing.
Thanks for sharing these beautiful words, and all the best in the contest,
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Thanks you
Thanks for reading my poen and thanks for the correction glad u like it..
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Very nicely penned with some very beautiful imagery. An excellent message here for us too. Thanks so much for your entry
gaylene
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Thank ou
Im really glad u like it it is also my first time writting something new like this again thanks...
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