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Secrets

Missing image

 

 

 

Cocooned in a shroud

      like a corpse...

  Like a ghost on a lonely mission
   crawling through the streets...
      seeing only a slice of life

 

Never to feel

   raindrops on my tongue

      sun kiss my lips

         breeze on my cheek ~

but...


behind these eyes...

untouchable
      dreams

behind these eyes...

I have the key to


        My

 

           Secret

 

               World
 

 

 

           

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  • breedluv silver member
    July 8

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    It makes you wonder what Middle Eastern women do when they're not draped in forced clothing and constrained to their role in society. Do they act differently? A really good write, great imagery, and obviously some deep thought.

  • Woodchuck4400 silver member
    July 2
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    Nice imagery. Great job.


  • arafura
    July 2
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    Very good! I see where you're coming from with this. Good luck in the contest!