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Our son is born

Today our son and heir was born
Zeeden Adam is his name
for we are sure that if we call him this
he will never be tempted to sin
(like the first Adam did)

He will however blossom like the flowers
in the garden of Eden
and in all he meets implant the seeds
of acceptance, love and peace

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Prompt:Suggested boys names...from Z to A...Zeeden Adam...I saw the name Zeeden in a magazine and thought it quite unique..Good luck with your quest and good luck all...(my daughter has twin boys but there was no history of twins in either family as far back as we know yet they were conceived naturally)...No names in comments please

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  • Midnight Raeven
    July 4, 2008

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    Wow this one is different, unsure if I would use it for my son. Adam however is my father and brother's first name. Thanks for entering


  • Lucian Valcor
    July 3, 2008
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    Interesting name and powerful poem. Thanks for the entry.

    Lucian"


  • penman gold member
    July 2, 2008
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    Excellent

    Very creative and well expressed. A great choice of names.