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~Leather and Rose~

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I lay here with my training collar as part of me, a circle of thick leather,cold and black. My love for you conforms to the shape of this.

There is no beginning, no ending, no start, no finish. It is forged with love , trust and loyalty. I give You my body, my soul, everything that i am. I give You all i am, and ever will be.

You who possesses this ring of leather,knows exactly how i feel. You own the collar and a whole lot more,You own me.

My body craves Your pain,stinging slaps, burning scratches, animal lust taking over as i lay naked before You.

Pleasure and pain interwined.Sadistic orchestration played upon my flesh, moans, gasps, screams, white hot fire. Raging lava surges through my veins, body arching to meet each note as You play them upon my skin, masochistic lust satisfied. Oh yes.....the anticipation!

A crop slicing the air, the sound filling my ears, my body sways to meet its caress. Leather bites tender flesh raising welts with each kiss, leaving burning patches behind upon my tender thighs.

Our two hearts beat as one as the crop dances in time building a bonfire of need. Flames raging hotter and hotter, searing my mind with animalistic desires.

My gift of submission is given freely to You. Your cuffs and collars delight me, i am Yours to command, Yours till the end of time.

Your slave, Your love, Your Rose.



© 2008 Angel's Whispers (All rights reserved)



Hello dear poet,
Thanking you in advance for reading my words and for any comments that you leave. Your time and review is greatly valued. I appreciate your thoughts dearly.
I hope you enjoyed the read.
Take care and many blessings to you.
Your friend in poetry.

~Angel~


Author notes

CONTEST PROMPT:
Write about what the picture
brings to mind.

Adult writes.So mark it as such.
Have fun.

Rules:
No more than 25 lines.
no sticky caps, all caps, or txt lingo.
Riftkin.

*HI RIF MY ENTRY CONTAINS 21 LINES*

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Comments

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  • catz Moderators member
    July 11
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    Well, though I've never been a proponent of the laster/slave thing, your poem makes it seem appealing. It's beautifully written, exquisite in it's presentation... and the well earned recipient of another Gold trophy, I see Congratulations !

    Do you do your own backgrounds? The ones I've seen so far are beautiful
    Dee


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 5

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    This was outstanding... I for one know that if this was written as a slave to a Master.... the words are not correctly done to be in that form.. but I love it as it is...

    Riftkin

    • Riftkin


      Hello Riftkin Thank you for your kind comment and applause on my entry.I don't know much about the Master/slave relationship,I have only read about it in the pages of A.P.However, I am pleased that you liked the entry.
      Blessings to you.
      ~Angel-anne~

  • ckwriter69 silver member
    July 4

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    Very hot and erotic piece Angel. A master would be pleased by your loyality. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

    • ckwriter69


      Hello beautiful soul.Thanks so much for the read and applause,you know how to make a girls heart jump for joy
      So happy that you enjoyed the read.I always love hearing from you,and value your thoughts on my work.You are such a precious jewel.Take care sweetness and many blessings to you.

      luv ya
      Your loving angel friend,
      ~Angel~
  • mcfreeman
    July 2
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    Unique approach

    diamond studded

    • mcfreeman


      Hello Sweet Soul,Blessings to you dear one.
      Thank you for the read and for leaving your comment along with your applause.I appreciate your thoughts dearly.You take care dear friend.Much love to you.
      Your friendly angel in poetry,
      ~Angel-Anne~
      • mcfreeman
        July 7
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        Should you

        write more of these, I would be pleased.
        • mcfreeman


          Hello Sweet One, Thanks for the comment,I am not quite sure about writing more of these, I feel that I will have to educate myself more with this life style. Maybe some where down the road I just might.So pleased that you enjoyed
          Take care and much love.
          ~Angel~
  • Great!

    I like this poem and the picture is wonderful!
    • hotchocolate


      Hi Hotchocolate!
      Thanks so much for stopping by to read my poem,and also for leaving your comment.I appreciate your thoughts dearly.So glad that you enjoyed the read.
      Take care dear Poet,and many beautiful blessings of love and happiness to you.
      Your friendly angel in poetry,
      ~Angel-Anne~
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