Galaxies diminish with
dreams of evil creation
Or come alive
with Angels protection..
Temptation flowing
in whispered waves
of stars..
With wings of
Loving grace
that captures
the sinners gaze..
[Whimpers of the mighty
Are softly heard
as they fall beneath dull
Intentions..]
Pleasure sensations
wrapped in darkened
intentions..
Pale beneath the sliver
of moonlight.
Playing with desires
strings.. Earth in the
balance of destruction
or conception..
Masculine beauty
speaking of both
Evil and innocence,
Tempting with sensual
fingers that dance us to heaven
as we commit pleasurable
sin..
Author notes
Lord_of_Nightmares_by_Dianae
A contest entry
- Dark Picture Prompt... Semi-Quickie by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended July 3, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love the dark sensuality in this! The two sides of someone.. this is really a fantastic write! Love it!! Beautifully written!


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very nice dark prompt darling i love it lots,
i love the imagery you create its dark,
and very very beautiful,
all my love,
keep penning,
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Really masterful... beautiful words, powerful images... "tempting with sensual fingers that dance"... a wonderful phrase that sing... Superb.
Ken

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Oh wow, this is an awesome take on the picture. So beautifully written. The imagery is stunning, flow superb. Truly an outstanding piece, extremely well crafted....simply wow! Good luck
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Really? You think that it's good? I don't like it..lol.
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I think its excellent! A diamond in the rough as they say
I would place it without a doubt
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Aww well thats sweet of you!!
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Tis the truth hunni
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You do not give yourself enough credit! This is a great take on the picture prompt. I looked at the picture and my muse would not wake up. Well done to you hun. Juls


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oh nice!
i thought this was a hard picture, and you have done really, really well!!!!
i agree completely with cannonsfire
[Whimpers of the mighty
Are softly heard
as they fall beneath dull
Intentions..]>>>>>>>>>just great, powerful lines!!!!!
bravo~
good luck~!!!


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Thanks.. I'm glad that you like it.. I sure don't..lol.
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Nicely done here, dark and sensual and some interesting thoughts you have penned.
C
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Thanks.. I'm sure that this is not what she wanted but.. Hey I tried right?
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