From within the stars he came,
carrying nightmares and untold pain.
Tempest boils in his blazing eyes,
craving one thing only, your demise.
Stealthily creeping into your mind,
delivering all the terrors of time.
Watch you cringe, shudder and shake,
knowing from this you'll never wake.
Ensnaring thoughts with vile visions,
panic rises with repugnant precision.
Swivet swings with flailing arms,
as he unleashes lethal charms.
Closed eyes wide, see bloodshed flow,
neurons sear, buzzing to and fro.
Whispers pass through slumbering lips,
as muscles contort and flesh rips.
Disjointed eyes roll round and spin,
mounting his pleasure from within.
Innocence taken, essence drained,
empty skin and bare bone remain.
Another soul overpowered by dread,
adding one more to his count of the dead.
Decaying aura savagely exposed,
another death shall be misdiagnosed.
Author notes
Picture prompt.
Credit Artist: Lord of Nightmares by Dianae at Deviantart
LadyDementia
Option 5
"Cut out my eyes so I can't see this cruel world hates me"
A contest entry
- Dark Picture Prompt... Semi-Quickie by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended July 3, 2008, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What do you think? {options} by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
300 points, ended July 23, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Great poem my favorite part was when you said "Stealthily creeping into your mind,
delivering all the terrors of time.
Watch you cringe, shudder and shake,
knowing from this you'll never wake." Very well written. Please read over the rules this is a warning i will check up on this and if you still didnt read them i will DQ you. thanks for entering tho
..<3..
Shelly -
Demented torture!
Esquisite is the pain of words such as these. Their acid sears holes in my poor brain as brain juice drips through the empty cavities of my eyes. A well deserved gold for my Demented lady. I love your new home page. Its darkness and dankness makes for a great dungeon. Thanks!
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Wow.. brilliant dark tale you have penned for the pic.. keep me so captivated!! And the write could be not only for the picture but about the abuse of someone...
Stunning write!
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I never thought of that but your right, after reading it again I can see it quite clearly...Thanks hunni
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i am in a lost for word here, i mean you have done a great job on this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest, i still love that bg.
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ooh this is very dark and eerie hun,
i love this so much its just beautiful,
and you know much i enjoy a dark write ^^
all mu love,
kitty xxx -
wow grandma...you amaze and inspire me with your words because you write with such power and the rhyme is flawless with strong and prominent imagery. well done
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I absolutely loved this....the rhyme was flawless and the imagery was pure darkness, as only you can do.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe**
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Yay!!
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good luck Mommy... I bet you will do great..
love you lots
kat
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