All the memories I have,
of my head lain on your chest.
Listening to your heart beat,
as your chest rises and falls.
All I need is for your arms,
to be wrapped around me.
To be your one and only,
unconditionally loved by you.
To hear all those words,
that once filled my ears and soul.
Holding you close again,
but the wall of friendship is blocking me.
Just tell me you need me,
that you love me.
Of course I only want,
your happiness.
Your smile is my,
greatest treasure.
Your laugh my,
greatest pleasure.
Author notes
4.Just love period, doesnt matter what kind (broken
love, together, New love, breakup) it doesnt matter
A contest entry
- Condition of the heart - Love (Lost, Found, Broken Together) by Sle3p.
1150 points, ended July 13, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow i have been in love and it is powerful to hear and feel your perspective


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haha this piece was not bad!
"lain on your chest"?
other then being a touch cliche it was quite good! enjoyed it (: best of luck in the competition! -
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I wasn't meaning it to be cliche this is all based on a real experience. the last part is the truest part of it this all flowed together cause it's all real.
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