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Deep Gaze

Eyes greener than the leafs from the tallest tree
Sometimes I wonder what they truly see?

Firm gaze than the strongest rock
They cut deep into ones soul
Eyes that have seen untold stories
They sink deep into ones mind

Strong yet gently they stare at everything that looks it way
They trap and submerge you into a deep hypnosis
Behind their green curtains hide many truth
I wish i could see trough them  yet i will be afraid if i could...

 

They follow you

and they trap me

They curse others with their magic spell

Eyes that have life of their own

They speak the truth

They put lies naked on the road of life

Eyes that pierce through everything thats foul...

These eyes are meant to search out the truth

They follow you

but they trap me

Leaving behind nothing but a memory..

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  • breedluv gold member
    July 8, 2008

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    An interesting poem. However, spellcheck is your friend, and watch the capitalizations, plurals and tenses. It may seem nitpicky, but don't let little mistakes detract from a good poem. I will be coming back prior to judging.
    Russell