My dreams are of you and the way you make me feel, when we’re together in our little world.
Your soft scent lingers, delicately in my mind as if it were an unforgettable memory.
The touch of your hand, as you caress my face, causes my skin to tingle in anticipation of those moments yet to come.
The feel of your breath upon my skin, so fine and delicate as a newly bloomed rose, rekindles the passions long forgotten.
The fervor in your lips, as they press against mine, is as sweetly intoxicating as any vintage wine.
The gentle timbre of your voice stirs my once lonely heart to wakefulness, knowing we share a special gift.
If I do dream then wake me not, for there is no where I’d rather be, then here with you for the rest of time.
Author notes
This was spur of the moment late write for a contest that had closed shorty before I wrote. so honesty counts.
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very romantic. sometimes writing your thoughts down quickly turns out to be the best wayto get a true message across. nicely done
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A true romantic...
you must carry pen and paper my friend...
Truly a passionate write.
Blessing,
Lowell poe
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The way you have written this with the longer lines makes it more poetic prose, but it does not lessen the fervor and love that are poured into the lines, to write from your heart, that is definitely the best place for a poet and this one shines with yours.
C
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the best writes come when they are written on the spur of the moment, like this one! and the emotions are felt, cos they are real and not made up, again like this write, so keep writing when your thoughts flow and dont delay, cos then they would all be lost. this was wonderful to read, and thanks for sharing this with su,
Love and light,
Lencio
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Beautiful. I've been there. Praying that it's not a dream and that I don't have to wake up. Sigh. I really liked the sensual feel of this.
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This is just a BEAUTIFUL PASSIONATE WRITE! Your imagery and flow are like a beautiful stream...Do not be afraid of breaking your lines in poem form, because it will read still the same...Keep up the lovely work and inspiration..It is so refreshing to read!
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A short but to the point write. A very well collected piece of passion with a flow like water making an easy read entwined endless emotions! Beautifully done!
Keep on writing for you have lots to say, share, teach and learn from yourself as well as others!
~Night
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Wakeful Dreams a wonderful poem the love you express here is just beautiful, I love this line most.....The fervor in your lips, as they press against mine, is as sweetly intoxicating as any vintage wine.
great write! Vickie
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