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Hush

A cruel word said.
Made cruel just by the tone.
See what happens next.

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Never have been very good at haikus. just thought of giving it a try.

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  • zillion
    July 4, 2008

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    I'm not good at haikus either. Or any form really. But it's true that the tone alone can make somethiing sound cruel.


  • Kim
    July 2, 2008

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    FIRST TRY...GOOD TRY. ALSO SO VERY TRUE. IT ALL DEPENDS ON THE TONE OF VOICE. SO I GUESS I'LL JUST HUSH NOW.