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Sweet Dreams

Missing image
Sheltered in dreams
of fairy tales
and sweet kisses,

[reality invades]

As loneliness shows truth,
no white horse is coming..

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10 Poets
20 Words

A contest entry

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  • Silvos. silver member
    July 10

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    A well waerned trophy here, you managed to succeed in little lines what most poets fail to do in 30. I loved this so much, it was written very eloquently.

    Silvos.

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 3

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    Oh this is just wonderful sis!! Sometimes we have to ride our own white horse I think.. sigh..

    Congrats on the well deserved gold!!


  • marlene47 silver member
    July 2

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    Ooo, I like this - the movement from dreams and fairy tales to reality and the knowledge there's no knight in shining armor. Okay - on to new dreams where you're the hero.
    Congratulations on the gold.
    Marlene


  • mysticstorm gold member
    July 2

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    AWE!!! This is so beautiful and so sad...so very well written in brevity with a wonderful strong ending of truth...fairy tales should be ban (lol)...but back to the write, AWESOME!!!
    Congrat's on the Gold...
    Love,
    :


  • SuicidalLover gold member
    July 2

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    Aw...how sad my sweet guardian angel.... This is beautifully penned and a well deserved gold!
    ~Kystal Angel


  • Lost Vampyre Angel Greeters member
    July 2

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    ooh yay dark, i love this alot,
    this is so beautiful, also you related it with the picture so well, i love it so so much,
    all my love,
    kitty xx

  • Sensual Angel gold member
    July 2

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    aww this is so sad.. and very relateable to me.. reality has a way of doing that.. ruins dreams a lot of the time.. this touched my heart right to the core..

    excellent job with the poem and fantastic job with the prompt.

    good luck

    kat


  • solo wisp gold member
    July 2

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    Reality sux ... let's wallow in dreamy fantasy for a while.

    heh

    Yes ...a sad truth for some.

    Good Luck in the contest

    Steve


  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 2

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    Such a sad piece, beautifully penned and a delight to read. I love this one to Typical of reality to come and squish dreams. Good luck in the contest

  • KayJay46 gold member
    July 2

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    It's beautiful but sad... A wonderfully laconic penning...
    Ken


  • fortyninereasons silver member
    July 2

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    Sad words you have penned here but there is always hope... Never give up hope. Juls


  • Sailor Ptolema silver member
    July 2
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    ooooo! good luck dear

  • markgrif gold member
    July 1
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    Your here!!!!!
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