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Eagle eye view

Up above the earth
the eagle doth soar
surveying as far

as his eye can see

his God given domain

A contest entry

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  • Lady Wildheart
    July 2, 2008

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    This is amazingly beautiful. I love that in those 5 short lines I see the beauly of what the eagle sees. so beautiful!

  • PureCountry
    July 1, 2008
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    The Eagle,

    perched upon his rocky crag, surveying the world below. Yes you have touched upon a possibility, and your words do so well.

    For even the eagle, one full of life, acknowledges the existance of Creator as all life does.

    Wonderfully Said!

    Best of Luck In The Contest!