Give me back my heart,
It doesn't belong to you anymore.
I didn't know about love.
Author notes
DON’T BORE THE F**K OUT OF Me!
A contest entry
- 16 Words by theredcatjazzoflove.
600 points, ended July 7, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 5-15 Words: Blow Me Away by xxRainbowDawnxx.
600 points, ended January 2, 96 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I know exactly what you mean, this happend when I was younger... I fell for a guy, but I didn't know I was falling for him, I just thought it was all fun and good friendship. Shows that osmeone can slowly kill us and we don't even know about it until it's way too late. Very well wrote.
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this is another peace that is very bold and powerful and makes my job as a judge very hard i love this a whole lot good luck to you in the contest
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Yeah, love hurts sometimes but can be... well... overtaken by events
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I LOVED how you used 16 words. Amazinggg. Absolutely incredible. Excellent. I don't know if I can come up with anymore adjectives. haha ;] This poem portrays so much. Good luck in that contest you entered! ♥
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