a murmuring honeysuckle
twists slightly
in the palm of spring
and you'll hear her breath
just
Author notes
-'Hush'
A contest entry
- hush by zillion.
500 points, ended July 16, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Breathtaking!
Fresh and beautiful. A wonderfully enchanting write. Best of luck in the contest! -
beautiful
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wow the way you ended it, was grasping and left almost at a cliff hanger which is amazing. I love each line and word. well done
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what a beautiful way to end a poem. There doesn't need to be a command- just the allusion of one.
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