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a murmuring honeysuckle
twists slightly
in the palm of spring
and you'll hear her breath

just

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-'Hush'

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  • Gypsie Ink silver member
    July 14
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    Breathtaking!

    Fresh and beautiful. A wonderfully enchanting write. Best of luck in the contest!

  • Sandra R Reynolds silver member
    July 7
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    beautiful

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    July 2

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    wow the way you ended it, was grasping and left almost at a cliff hanger which is amazing. I love each line and word. well done

  • zillion
    July 2
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    what a beautiful way to end a poem. There doesn't need to be a command- just the allusion of one.