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*~The Petals Of A Rose~*


 




He held me oh so lovingly,in his arms
while whispering softly in my ear.
"Here I am my love,for ever am I your rose",and placed into my hands,such a fragile and delicate flower,a beautiful deep red rose,to remind me of his love.



He said,"Take this red rose in remembrance of me,and that each petal represents a virtue.
The first beginning with the love that we share,and the deep respect that we hold for each other.



The tranquility and the serene happiness,that embraces our souls.
The passion that keeps the fires of desire burning bright,
and that the fragrance of the rose,was part of him,the heartbeat
his heart holds for me.



So I took this rose from my beloved fingers,the precious red rose of his heart, the token of the love we will forever share,and held it close to my own heart,both hearts now beating as one.




 





© 2008 Angel's Whispers (All rights reserved)



Hello dear poet,
Thanking you in advance for reading my words and for any comments that you leave. Your time and review is greatly valued. I appreciate your thoughts dearly.
I hope you enjoyed the read.
Take care and many blessings to you.
Your friend in poetry.

~Angel~


Author notes

Contest Prompt:

Riftkin says..."Here You go... now make my day.
I want you to pick a colour of a rose and pen me something beautiful".

Rules:


Mark your poems correctly.


Not to go over 15 lines.


Have fun one and all.


HELLO RIF


I HAVE CHOSEN THE COLOUR RED!  Representing: Love,Passion,and Respect.


My entry contains 15 Lines ..

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Comments

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  • Riftkin gold member
    July 8
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    wonderful use of words to write on a rose thank you for entering.. Riftkin


    • Angels Whispers gold member
      July 8
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      Riftkin


      Hello Dear poet,Blessings to you Riftkin.Thanks for the comment and applause,Your thoughts never go un-appreciated.Roses are my favorite flower, have very deep meaning to me.So pleased that you liked my entry,it was an honor writting it for you.
      Take care.
      ~Angel~

  • ckwriter69 silver member
    July 2

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    Excellent write, a rose of beauty that reflects you and how you write. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.


    • Angels Whispers gold member
      July 8
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      Dragonheart1


      Hello dear poet, Blessings to you and your loved ones.Thank you so much for reading my poemand for leaving your thoughts on it.I appreciate you very much.The rose has special meaning to me, they are my favorite flower.I'm pleased that you liked by layout of the poem,I try to bring the page alive with my writes.I believe that it sets off the mood of the poem.Take care dear oe and I wish you and your loved ones,much happiness.
      Your friendly AP Angel,
      ~Angel~

    • Angels Whispers gold member
      July 8
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      ckwriter69

      hello beautiful hope you are feeling better.Did you recieve my blessings of love health and happiness? I sent them to you I love your comment on my poem,your thoughts always make me feel very special,and I love you for your thoughfulness.You are a beautiful soul Charley.I am so happy that you liked the poem.Roses are my favorite flower,they have a special meaning to me.
      Take care sweet one,know that this angel cares about you very much, you are a loyal and true friend.lots of love to ya!
      Your friendly AP angel.
      ~Angel~

  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    July 2

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    I love the pic of roses on this page..especaily the hearts within the scolls..Just for the bg, you should win some trophy!

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