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A kiss that is never tasted,

Now sixteen
and having never kissed,
she finds all the boys
who've ever tried to date her
have, sans kisses,
now come to hate her.

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Prompted by the quote by Billie Holiday

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  • zillion
    July 16, 2008
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    for such a short poem I rather like this a lot.


  • alandriel1138
    July 1, 2008
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    Interesting, ironic perhaps. I like it. Well done. Can't relate- but that's just me.


    • Shenton silver member
      July 2, 2008
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      Thankyou for reading and commenting, and for your kind applause.

      Best wishes from 'down-under'.

      Shenton