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As I Walk






As I walk
I notice ridges in the sand and rock
Occuring at chaotic intervals.
Eventually I decipher the codes.
This is a love poem by the Creator
for all the creatures of this world,
A long and profound apology.

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  • PureCountry
    July 2, 2008

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    Chaotic Intervals,

    patterened enough to grab one's attention. A love poem by the Creator for all of the creatures. Your words have wonderful thoughts for a backdrop of meaning.

    Niaish for entering and Best Of Luck