This is the last goodbye
I can't take it anymore.
I can't hurt YOU anymore.
I just got to go.
I cannot hurt you again,
never again will I be able to.
I love you,
but I have lied to you.
What can I do?
I can't live with the lies,
not any longer.
It hurts to know that I lie.
I got to check out.
I need to go,
I can't do it.
I am sorry,
this is my last goodbye,
as I can't take it anymore.
You lasted longer than me,
you will actually win,
the game of life.
Author notes
You will win the game of life.
I am depressed and confused...
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great job,
i wish you the best of luck in my contest,
Love,
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Intersting take on what the game of life is. I really enjoyed this poem. Very nice ending as well. Ah, so many times I have tried to say "good bye" but it never worked. Keep on writing, until you can't no more!
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and what a game it is
wow this really brought alot to mind love sucks is the main one at least thats how i interpret it i love the last part maybe you could change the part from this is the last goodbye to this is my last goodbye? probably keep it as it is though its great!
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wow this is so very sad......
its so hard for me to tell people good-bye even when i know it is for the best!!
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awww wow this is realy great, i wish that it was that easy for me to tell ppl goodbye
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such a sad peice! but totally amazing too.. keep writting, and letting ur emotions out!
lub HB
xoxox
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this is a awesome write babe....
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wow, this hits deep in my own thoughts, very emotional. great job.
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omg please dont im here if you need to talk just think about all hte good things in life, do something to get your mind off of the bad things but this poem gets the point across im here for you even if i might not know you that well but i do know is yoiu help me ill help you....
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