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A touch of wonder




The last rose of summer
sways
above the gate ~
whispering
like a beautiful friend
Who remembers

 

 

 

 

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DON’T BORE THE F**K OUT OF Me!

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    July 7, 2008
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    Great short write gives a nice message.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 3, 2008

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    very soothing here i think you relly did very great excellent time penning this good luck to
    you in the contest


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 2, 2008

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    I absolutly adore the imagery within this piece and it is so profound and simple yet elegant and stunning at the same time. truly wonderful and inspiring write well done


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    I didn't realise something so profound and beautiful could come from so few words and lines. I am mesmerised.