Languishing the waters mirror,
The rippling of dreams broken,
Reflecting just how things look,
On the surface of my soul.
Author notes
So hard to keep it to 20 words....
A contest entry
- Quickie # 4 - then that's it!!! lol by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended July 1, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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short and sweet and amazing
Great work!
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Silver...much deserved my friend...wonderful write!
Sue
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Beautiful Words
Congratulations on the well deserved Silver!!! You have penned twenty beautiful words. A poem with wonderful imagery. A pleasure to read this morning.
Take care.
Sandy
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Languishing the waters mirror,
The rippling of dreams broken,
Reflecting just how things look,
On the surface of my soul.
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Great Lines a good well rouned verse, for Adults and Children alike. -
Languishing the waters mirror,
The rippling of dreams broken,
Reflecting just how things look,
On the surface of my soul.
.............
Great Lines a good well rouned verse, for Adults and Children alike.
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Excellent. You did a great job with few words. Congrats on the trophy
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A tinge of sadness that reflects the picture.. beautifully written
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very nicely done, well written, i like this!
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But you did it so well... Nicely done with warm images... Best of luck..
Ken
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