Water songs softly
fill my drifting spirit
with images of
dancing flowers…
the sun warms
the breeze embraces
my daydreams.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: Leigh_ze_Dei_by_emptyidentityentity
20 words
A contest entry
- Quickie # 4 - then that's it!!! lol by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended July 1, 7 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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aw....such divinity....you always amaze, always...
!~a trophy winner for sure!
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A lovely daydream to have and pretty images!
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Excellent!
Lovely words for a lovely picture. Both expertly painted by different artists in different mediums.
Good Luck!
Regards,
Jennifer -
Excellent!
Lovely words for a lovely picture. Both expertly painted by different artists in different mediums.
Good Luck!
Regards,
Jennifer
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this is very nice...hey, we have similar titles! lol well done!
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What can I say? "Great minds..."
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I want daydreams like yours... I'm jealous
I love this poem of yours.. this is absolutely beautiful..
good luck
kat
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We'll call it a tie
... trade - even steven!
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that works for me.. as long as it works for you..
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I really liked your take on the prompt, its most fitting. I think the form is great....well written
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Very dreamy my friend.
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A lovely dreamy take on the picture. I feel relaxed already.
Good luck in the contest.
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well, good for you. Let me know when it's in and I'll reread - I am clicking on random poems - thanks for the hug. Have fun writing.
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yay!
i've been greedy with her contests ...can't stop entering them
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