Bars are too boring; we walk the streets
One suggest a strip club, not a bad idea
Grab a couple brews, sit back and relax
Won't be busy; it's a Monday
We walk in, the place is pretty dead
We sat on a table in the second row
Chillin' out; talking about girls
We order a round of beers; it starts
The announcer calls girl one to the stage
Anastasia was her stage name; we were wow-ed
She got up on the main stage
Clad in a white/grey/black camo bikini
About 5'5'' without her 6-inch platforms
Black hair tied-up in a pony tail
Perfectly tanned skin; she was Latina
Body like I've never seen
Sculpted legs and an ass you just wanna touch
Firm breasts look like their coming out of her top
Everyone in the place looks in awe
The loners and birthday celebrators rush to sit at the stage
Not us; we were just there watching from afar
Each girl did three songs in a set
Taking off more each time; go ahead Anastasia
She begins her routine; grinding on the poles
Sliding across the floor of the stage
Seducing the entire crowd with her eyes
We sit there talking about how sexy she is
Just as many girls in the front row as guys
There to have good fun or bi-sexual?
Beats me
On her knees shaking her ass; my god
A buddy almost went and put ten in her crack
We restrained him; he was pretty drunk
But that’s okay; we’re having a good time
Now I see why people have stripper poles in their houses
She continues as a guy lays on the stage with a 20 in his mouth
She sexily crawls over while removing her top
Fully exposing her breasts; hard nipples and a 30C-cup
Stunning; yearning just to suck on those
She crawls so her tits are on top of his face
Shaking them; grabbing the bill while squeezing them together
She gives him more
As she tell him to open his mouth; she drops her right breast
And tells him to suck on it; he’s loving every moment
I’m sitting there gazing at her; we look at each other shocked
She is fuckin’ sexy as hell
Thoughts start to rush through all of our heads
Mine too; but I don’t know of what yet
There’s a 5-minute break before her second song
We sip and discuss the things we’d let her do to us
Wow
Second song starts up as she’s on the pole
They pretty much play fuck music to set the mood
This one was eye-popping
A song from our ‘list’
Music to my ears; ‘Grind Wit’ Me’ mixed with ‘Bump N’ Grind’
My jaw dropped; oh did she ever grind
I could only think of you and no one else
This was longer as she called a second stripper up
Double show; waiting to see what happens
Both of their tops were off; now for the bottoms
As Anastasia laid on her back on stage
The other darker chick crawls over her
As they kiss once; she moves her face to Anastasia’s hips
Pulling her thong off with her teeth and hands
So sexy
What comes next; Anastasia stays in the position legs open
Pussy bare; As this mystery girl puts her face in it
Eating her out; for quite a while
Me and my boy think; what the fuck…
Hundreds of dollars fly onto the stage
Guys and girls hollering; I stared at the stage deep in thought
Thinking of you; sexual deeds and memories
My brain was working overtime
This set was a lot longer as Anastasia rolled the other on her back
Took off her thong the same; licking her pussy
This time with it facing towards our table
Money flying like crazy; she began to gently finger the mystery girl
My thoughts just picked up to a whole new level
But it wasn’t over yet
Two girls put bills in their mouths and laid on the stage
Same as the guy in the first song
Both Anastasia and the mystery stare at the first one
A thicker girl; pale skinned and there to have a good time
Both girls crawl over to her as Anastasia takes the bill from her mouth
With her own; as the other straddles her from the waist
Voyeurism at its finest
As the mystery girl takes the woman’s shirt and bra off
Begins to lick and suck on her nipples; she is at a loss for words
Probably thinking
What the hell is this stripper doing?
That wasn’t it; Anastasia then pushed her tits into the girls face
Making her suck them forcefully; three girls live
I could only think about one; you
Sexually turned on by my thoughts, not even what was happening
Wasn’t hard; just mentally stimulated
I wondered in my head
That Anastasia must fuck like a porno star
And the mystery one could swallow dick like crazy
Thoughts, memories, fantasies, you
Wrap it up in one; you as that stripper
With me as the only person there…
After that girl got off stage embarrassed; the second girl was next
She was in for a treat that she wasn’t expecting either
Anastasia crawled over her grabbing the bill with her ass cheeks
Then extended her legs to split; her pussy straddled her face
She bounced her ass up and down; along with her pussy
I wonder if it’s tight…
She then completely smothered the woman’s face with it
While learning forward and unbuttoning her jeans; for space
Sticking her hand in the woman’s pants; Anastasia fingered her crazy
As interactive of a strip club as you can get
Without the private room
The second set ended; and there was another break
We couldn’t even speak after just watching that
All of us imagining, fantasizing
One of us was missing his wifey of two years
One of us was missing his fuck buddy girl
One of was missing his hoes in Thailand
I was missing one; you
After this next song we were going to leave
She gets back on stage for the last set and the music hits
Not again…what are the chances?
Another song from our ‘list’ to close out her set
‘Contagious’; one of the hottest songs ever
My mind raced uncontrollably, it felt so good
Flashbacks to your naked body; you on the stage
I start to harden just a bit…
She dances; more excited than the other two dances
Pole tricks; upside down, grinding to the music
Ass spread with the pole in between
Spinning; staring in our direction
Suddenly she got more erotic; horny it seemed
As she rolls on the floor facing us on her back
Legs open, spread in the air
As she begins to entice the huge money
Fingering herself vigourously; grinding at the same time
The music was a victim; so was my mind
All I could see was you, your body ready for me
As she picked up at least 500 bucks in cash from the stage
We we’re finishing our drinks ready to leave
As I closed my eyes for a minute; imagining you
How much I missed your touch…your kiss…your body
You in place of Anastasia and me upfront to watch
Fingers in your pussy, cock in your mouth
Making you scream, gasp for air; leaving handprints on your ass
With our music playing in the background
It makes the mood that much more heightened
I wanted you so fucking badly
Wanted you to make me cum like you always did
Lust, passionate lust; took over my mind
As I snap back to reality, the guys get up to go to the washroom
I’m there grabbing my wallet
I turn around and she’s there; sitting beside me
Hey! Anastasia said; wondering if I enjoyed her show
She has to make her money too
She tries to make small talk, and I talk for a while
Making jokes about the stuff on stage
My buddies are ready to go, so I let her know
She grabs me by the arm and whispers in my ear
20 for a lap dance…
50 for a jerk…
100…I’ll swallow…you can touch me too…
200…well you know what happens for 200…
Not my thing, never will be
I let her know I wasn’t interested
But instead, I thought about you and me in a private room
The things I’d let you do to me; whatever you wanted
And I’d do so many nasty things to you
My cock would be yours to use as you please
I’d make sure that pussy was sore the next day
Sorry Anastasia, gotta get going
We all walked out fantasizing about the one we missed
The strip club wasn’t all that, but it triggered our minds and senses
All I wanted to do was sense you; wishing you were there
Wishing I could lust you away, take you to ecstasy
Multiple orgasms fueled by fire
Anywhere you want me to put it I will
I wanted to have you that night, have you all to myself
For us to be selfish and lust and love like never before
Women on stage showed me what I was missing with you
I wanted to lust you…worse than I’ve wanted you ever before
I’ll never forget Anastasia; you know why?
Because she was the stripper in front of me
She wasn’t the important one
The only stripper in my mind
Was you
Come strip for me…
Author notes
A visit we took last night to a strip club...all of this went on for real...and in my head. All I could think of was lusting with her...the one who could do me like no other...this one stripper just brought it out of me and all of my buddies at that particular moment in time.
It is a lengthy write...but it REALLY had to be. I thought out everything; a unique loose structure that can be interpreted however you want. I just wrote...this is as real as my thoughts got...it is raw. I hope you all enjoy it.
Feedback welcome!
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Comments
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Steamy and very entertaining. Personally, I like the longer ones better because you find yourself immersed in the whole scene. Vivid images that had me thinking of all kinds of things. Yet you didn't come out looking like a total whore. (not easy to do with this topic) Well done indeed. Keep up the good work!
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Sounds like one hell of an adventure, good to see that love got its way in the end.
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Wow this is awesome!!!!!! i dont even know what to say. You have great talent here. I love that its focaused around "her". This is awesome keep it up


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that was a fearless write.
lust and sex and very strong forces...add beer to the mix...you're lucky you came out alive!
you saw the happy party of the dark....unfortunately
I always end up the families of one of their daugters
asking me for help.
I'm not judging you in any way...promise!
fearless was this write and hey..you walked out with
your dignity still asking yourself....the questions
that remain.
well done!
ears/Seattle fearless and bold.


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woww this was awesome...i could picture everything!! musta been a good night for you =P
another great write =)
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Wow, this is quite entertaining, I must say! I liked how real you kept it - almost a mini documentary of this experience and I liked that way you kept bringing it back to how it made you yearn for your own girlfriend. Very nice.







