I'm a little broken
I'm a little shaken
I'm a little confused
Dead on the inside
I look around asking everyone what's my problem
And they all say
Nothing
Nothings wrong
Everythings fine
But deep inside I know they walk a thin line
Lies and falacies placed before me
Truths and heartbreaks beyond conformity
Not able to be fixed
Is there nothing wrong with this?
I gave my happiness to my best friend
But I cant help it
I keep looking back
I stare at everyone
As they all look away
Nothing works out
And it's all my fault
Twisted words,
False statements,
Blunt lies,
All come back at once
All directed towards me
Breaking me down
Further and further
To a point of tears
And a lake is formed
But the truth is
Im not the one who's going to drown
It's going to be you
The one I love
The one I hurt
The one that hurt me
The one I cant stand to look at anymore
As fires from the hell you've created
Incinerates my heart
You'll be left for dead
Trust me
It's not what I wanted
It's just what you've made it
This time
It's your fault.
A contest entry
- give me your pain. by aanika.
525 points, ended July 2, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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i like this so much it sounds just like me
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Dundundunnn. Pretty much loved this. ALOT. Because I can relate to it sooo freaking well, it's crazy ! You surely have a way with words that's inspiring.
"But the truth is
Im not the one who's going to drown
It's going to be you"
Sooo I pretty much fell in love with those lines. They remind me of my past, and they remind me why I never looked back. I loved how you ended this, too. Incredible. Keep writinggg
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