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Sweet sixteen

Sweet sixteen,
never having been kissed,
she now realises, regretfully,
all the things she has missed.

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DON’T BORE THE F**K OUT OF Me!

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  • adora
    July 3, 2008
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    It's never too late.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 3, 2008
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    very nice you really did a great awesome job good luck to you in the contest


  • Chrysalis
    July 2, 2008

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    to be sixteen... so young and stupid. lol.
    experimenting with all kinds of stuff... hmmmm brings back memories. lol. (rofl*

    Lovely write... nothing boring.

    blessed be
    Blanche


  • tarcus
    July 2, 2008

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    Neat and to the point, I wonder how many really do have the same regrets?
    Perhaps though it would be better if there were more as the rate of teenage pregnancies is rising rapidly around the world.


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    July 1, 2008
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    cute write good luck


    • Shenton silver member
      July 2, 2008
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      Thankyou for reading and commenting.

      Best wishes from 'down-under'.

      Shenton

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