living life like zombies
walking the streets in flesh
passing others as strangers
only the dancing shadows
rejoice without losing to DARKness
Author notes
22 words; picture inspired!
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Manda Kathryn.
600 points, ended July 8, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Darkly intense, you created a different world for this picture and I enjoy the unique and sad imagery
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Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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thnx a bunch, sorry for the late response but it seems i was on here last a few days before you posted that comment almost a year ago, DARK.
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Nice write my friend fantastic take on the picture best of luck with the contest
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thanx for taking the time to comment, DARK.
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Great Write!!!!!
So true, so true are your words. Many do walk around like zombies oblivious to those around them and what truly matters in the end. Great take on the picture. Best of luck. Take care. Sandy
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thanx for taking the time to comment, DARK.
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good luck to you, seems there are way too many people walking around with eyes wide open but not seeing anything. Juls
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thanx for taking the time to comment, DARK.
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