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Scream

Scream.

Scream until your lungs give out.
Scream like there was never a doubt.

Scream until your heart explodes with passion.
Scream like its the new found fashion.

Scream until your emotions run dry.
Scream like it was all just a lie.

Scream until your whole world shakes with thunder.
Scream like there was never a plunder.

Just......

Scream.

Author notes

I have no idea where this came from so don't ask me. lol. I guess it ties in with my new AP name "Schrei." Which is German for "Scream."

I may add more to this later. I'm not sure.

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  • staceyrella
    August 23
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    Very good emotional piece. I so often feel like screaming.

  • reinhardt-napoleon
    August 4

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    How did you get the idea of calling yourself "Schrei", besides the point.
    Anyway, good poem. Sometimes I totally feel like just screaming.
    This poem reminds me of a song I like.
    I like that you always start with the same word, "Scream".
    Keep on writing - I'm keeping on!
    Jo


  • Note The Sarcasm
    August 1

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    This was great. It sounds a lot like something I've written, only I wrote it in German.

    "Schrei bis mein Herz halt an
    Schrei bis meine Ohren explodiert
    Schrei bis meine Lungen zusammenbrecht
    Schrei bis du hörst mich"

    English translation (in case you don't speak German): "Scream until my heart stops/Scream until my ears explode/Scream until my lungs collapse/Scream until you hear me".

  • IsabellaSwanCullen
    July 22
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    just beautiful...sometimes in the stess of life we just need 2 Schrei lol

  • Shadow Darkstar silver member
    July 8

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    You and you're rhyming. -.- Bah anyhoot. This seems finished to me. Can't really comment on it right now.

  • Krista.Marie
    July 6
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    I like this poem a lot.
    The rhyming flows really good.
    Great job!!


  • dontlove
    July 3

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    I feel like doing that sometimes.
    (well maybe i do) Other than that,
    This is really good. I like it.


  • Viva La Vie Boheme
    July 2

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    Maybe from Lostprophets - "standing on the rooftops, everybody scream your heart out! This is all we got now, everybody scream your heart out"?

    Like the new name. And I'd love to just scream. We should all just have a day where everyone can scream just for the sake of screaming.


  • Lost Vampyre Angel Greeters member
    July 2

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    this is very good, i like the rhyme scheme in this poem,
    i love this alot its very very wonderful,
    all my love,
    kitty xxx

  • Serene Rose
    July 2
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    i like it

  • Bryan-CarnelianHope
    July 1

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    I like it! It's short, sweet, to the point, and every line is as powerful as the one before! Awesomeness!


  • YoureNoGoodForMe silver member
    July 1

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    Ah I LOVE this ! We all do need to scream sometimes. This is such an inspiring poem. Loveddd it !! Haha, I take German, and I never knew that that meant scream Keep writing ! ♥
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