Seeing clearly in her point of view..
Non trusting on who is who..
Eye’s is glowing with many tells..
You can tell she has been through, lots of hell..
A strong woman, she has grown to be.
Her life has been hard, but her soul lives free
Looking into her soul, deep into her eye’s..
She is a special woman, one of a kind..
Author notes
Thanks for the challege... Your friend in poetry... JackReed3...
A contest entry
- The Eyes Have It by breedluv.
1300 points, ended July 10, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - My First Contest Ever!! :D by XxLoverOfDarknessxX.
900 points, ended January 20, 19 entries
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this is awesome!!! this needs to be published. i loved the emotions in this. keep up the good work! good luck and thanks for entering my contest!
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I like this poem, simple, yet has some good meaning to it. I would suggest correcting some small grammatical errors, as they detract from the poem;
"eye's" should be "eyes"
3rd line should be "eyes are"
extra comma, line 4 and 5
Watch punctuation
Not trying to nitpick, just want your poem to be the best it can be.
Russell -
A strongly drawn image from the reflection of her eyes... Very nicely done...
Ken
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Very good
I strongly believe that this imagery that is formed int his poem goes hand in hand with the picture...a great work.... -
Amazing write ! Loved it
What an excellent read. keep writing & good luck with that contest you entered! ♥
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