To Dream...
Is to live in worlds
Of fantasy, magic
And make believe.
Dream...
Hope...
Become...
dragonheart1
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hmm...nice one but not as much as your other poems
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I do enjoy my time living in fantasy. I play a game called Final fantasy IX -- I'm a paladin that fights dragons, and other monsters. At one point I'd play almost consistantly. Your poem carries me back to the game. You would probably love it!
I love the wording, you've written with inspiration ~ leaving any reader to dream of what can be. -
you suck...
You always want erotic stuff..Well dreams are what life is made of..not sex!I dont care if I dont' win...I wrote what I felt... -
"Dream, Hope, Become"
I'll probably adopt this as my personal mantra... -
this is nice honey but your author notes doesnt have what i require please fix it before judging i enjoyed your thoughts
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I really love this poem a lot. brings a smile to my face..
dreams, fantasy and yes magic...
good luck in the contest sweetheart..
kat
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this is so simple and has a lot of wonderful detials packed into it, keep up the beautiful writing, ~Amy
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love the sentiments but feel you sell yourself short by repeating one of your words.
perhaps 'aspiring' may fit somewhere?
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the freedom of magic, the freedom to become, to make believe, hope and always dream...sighs...beautiful and thank you for sharing with me
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