Your kiss
as soft as angel’s wings
I feel the world become
mist and fade in
the warming light
of your love…
Beauty surround me
as I see through your eyes…
Worry leaves me
at touch of your hand….
Peace fills my soul…
What can heaven offer
that I don’t have with you?
Author notes
Prompt: ~To love is to receive a glimpse of heaven.~ by Karen Sunde
Picture Credit: http://thegost4u.deviantart.com/art/Kiss-in-heaven-78016528
100 words or less
A contest entry
- PIF Quote Quickie, I hope...... by Riftkin.
675 points, ended July 2, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
Comments
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Thank you for this wonderful entry
into my contest.
Best wishes to you... please keep writing.
Riftkin
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Oh, beautifully sweet! A lovely take on the prompt.
(is it meant to be surrounds, not surround?)
Well done.
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