It hurts knowing that someone is trying to come between us.
It hurts knowing that your letting this person do that.
It hurts knowing that we don't spend as much time together as we use too.
It hurts knowing that my heart is aching and you ain't doing anything about it.
It hurts knowing you can accuse me of something that I will never do.
It hurts watching you grow fond of someone else as my heart breaks in two.
It hurts knowing I never love someone this much before.
It hurts knowing that your slowly slipping away from me.
It hurts knowing that the last time I kissed you could've been my good by.
It hurts knowing that I will still love you after all is said and done.
It hurts knowing that I tried and tried but still failed.
It hurts knowing that I will lose you completely.
It hurts so much that I am loving you this way!
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This is to Melissa!
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this is beautiful.
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aww this is beautiful,
such a beautiful painful amazing write,
keep penning you have talent,
love kitty xx -
wow this ie beautiful, I hope it all works out for you hunni and yoyu and Mellisa can be happy loves to you from me xx
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Hey sheila u aren't gonna lose me I love u soo much... U r not gonna lose me I ain't gonna go no where I promise I am sorry I didn't go with u tonight I just didn't want too go I just wouldn't feel right... But I love u AND I always will no matter wat!! u can write realli good and don't let nuttin come between us this is exactly how I feel when u talk to this gurl...look babi I love u and I always will no matter wat and no Alysssa isn't comin between us I can promise u that I love u way too much to even think bout leavin u... it hurts even thinkin bout it.. I will always love u with all my heart and soul no matter wat!!~love always,
melissa
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WOW! I really love the way that you
put this one together. Your words
are very deep and sad. It takes a lot
to sit down and write out your feelings
like this. It's terrible to know that
these things are happening to you and
I hope that someday it will all turn
around for you! Good luck to you in
your relationship and thanks a lot
for sharing your heart here!
Jeremy0826
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WOW
LOVE the structure. It's simple. Similar to my poem "Who's Better Than Me?" I love so many of these emotions and the last line says it all. You'll put up with whatever just to love the person, even if you shouldn't. I have so many favourite lines...
"It hurts knowing I never love someone this much before.
It hurts knowing that your slowly slipping away from me.
It hurts knowing that the last time I kissed you could've been my good by.
It hurts knowing that I will still love you after all is said and done.
It hurts knowing that I tried and tried but still failed.
It hurts knowing that I will lose you completely.
It hurts so much that I am loving you this way!"
WOW sorry for all of that, it's like the second half of the whole poem. I love it that much. This is exactly just how I feel sometimes.
I will always love her <3. 9/10! -
Wow. This is amazing. Great write sweetie and i truly hope things get better between you two. Ily!
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