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16 Killer Words

I'll try to pen a killer poem
With words, they'll wear you down
Sandpaper, emery boards.

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Don't bore the daylights out of me.

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  • adora
    July 3, 2008
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    I felt you could have done much more with the idea. It reminds me of the personalisation of poetry in the first stanza of Mark Strands "Eating Poetry"

    "Ink runs from the corners of my mouth
    There is no happiness like mine
    I have been eating poetry"

    All the best in this contest


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 2, 2008

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    this made me and a little which is a good thing because i am a big o meanie a lot of times i rarely do both so kudo's good luck in the contest


  • tarcus
    July 2, 2008
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    16 wasted words for me.
    Sorry.