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God's Domain

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Earthen sculpture upward bend,
reach skyward to Heaven's end.
Creation of Almighty's hands,
magnifigance of nature's lands.

The gentle wind and gentle rains,
have left behind wondrous remains.
Vista now seen atop the mound,
seen in awe mid thoughts profound. 

Towering strength a symbol tall,
built by the greatest love of all.
From prairie flat to mountain high,
God's domain neath heavenly sky.




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Photo Credit: lynn_hagan at photobucket

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  • MoonsShadow gold member
    July 2

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    the picture surely secures Gods domain, as it lies in valleys and beautiful natures scenery, thank you for sharing, congrats to you on the win! very worthy of it
    Linda


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 3
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      Good Morning Linda

      Thank you for the wonderful comment. Always nice to hear from you. You take care, Sandy
  • chiefmac
    July 2

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    The picture and the poetry match so well. The images in the picture offer stark beauty, as does the poetry. Rhyme flows smooth in the aabb quatrain which works well. The distinct description rings true and leaves insight that would work without the picture.


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 2
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      Wonderful Comment

      Thank you Dan, Always enjoy your pondering thoughts on my poetry. Thank you for reading. Take Care.

      Bless You,
      Sandy
  • Ir.muse
    July 2

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    hi my lovely auntie

    I'm back here again to read your wonderful poems.
    wow...I see you've already won the gold trophy for this beautiful piece.
    Love you & wish you the best.

    Shahrzad


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 3
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      Beautiful Comment

      Thank you my sweet Shahrzad, Your comment briught a smile. I hope all is well with you. Hugs and Smiles for you. Take care.

      Bless You,
      Auntie Sandy

  • Pisces rainbow
    July 2

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    God's Domain

    I have a poem with the same title,

    but your is much more beautiful,

    breaktaking imagery

    beautiful picture

    incredible poetess.

    God bless...


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 3
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      Lovely Comment

      Good Morning, Thank you for the wonderful comment. Always nice when you drop by. You have a great day. Take care.

      Bless You,
      Sandy


  • Silent Hawk gold member
    July 1

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    God's Domain,

    yes, some of my Indian ancestors even believed He walked here, within this place pictured. For it was considered a sacred place to some.

    You have shared wonderously of your vocabulary to pay homage to it also. Best of Luck!


    • Sandygram silver member
      July 2
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      Good Morning

      Thank you for this lovely comment. I am glad you enjoyed reading. You take care and have a nice day.

      Bless You,
      Sandy
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