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Defense,
Used to prevent pain,
Yet it often causes pain.
Lower your defenses
And love me.

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DON’T BORE THE F**K OUT OF Me!

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  • Levesta
    July 3, 2008
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    LOVE WRITE LOVE

  • Warrior7
    July 3, 2008
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    Welcome To Allpoetry

    Hi Restless Emotions

    Your very right about being defensive and hurting people, sometimes we don't mean to but when you get hurt time and time again it's easier to build walls and not let anyone in. A very short write but effective.
    Keep writing

    Andy
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  • adora
    July 3, 2008
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    How true. Nice one.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 2, 2008

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    awwwwwww i love you this was so sweet you made me fall for your words artist you did a great job thanks for entering