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[ I can't see what's in front of me. ]

I can't see what's in front of me.
I'm alone with people surroundimg me.
I can't help but to be sad.
I need you more than anything.

Why can't you face the facts.
That my heart is breaking at your hands.
I don't know why you do this,
But it's killing me.

I want you to finally feel
All the pain you caused to me.
I need you to understand,
All the love I have for you.

Can you tell me why I love you,
Can you tell me why you hate me.

Good? Bad? Be honest, and harsh if you must.

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  • aj.vamp
    July 2, 2008

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    I like this a lot. I feel its really good.
    "Why can't you face the facts.
    That my heart is breaking at your hands.
    I don't know why you do this,
    But it's killing me."
    Pure poetry (haha)


  • innocence jaded.xx
    July 1, 2008

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    I really liked this. I can relate to it so much, it's scary.

    "I can't see what's in front of me.'

    Yup, I think we all have that blindness when it comes to love

    "Why can't you face the facts.
    That my heart is breaking at your hands."

    Perrrfect lines. So true. Thanks for sharing this. It actually made me open my eyes a little. ♥