I love
to bring you to
your knees;
To kiss you
hard
just to remind you
that you're mine.
A flash of skin,
anywhere,
and we're in another
world
for hours.
I feel your hand
on my hip,
the warmth on my back,
three kisses on my neck,
my knees
give way.
There's electricity in
your gaze,
your touch,
your kiss;
I consider you
my first,
because I've never felt
this way.
...What do you think?
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"just to remind you
that you're mine."
I think there is a fine line between mine and mine
Reading beyond this line makes it much less clear who belong to who 
Lovely write.
s and best wishes always... ~Genie~
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This is called the love..where you are losing controls..just a heart warming piece...Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful verse...
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"To kiss you
hard
just to remind you
that you're mine."
That is beautiful
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Oh my God
That was beautiful! I really loved it. I actually think I might cry. There was so much love in it. It was truly amazing.
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This brought up a lot of emotion for me.. mostly bad stuff (if you read my latest poem that will be understood) but this is a very wonderful write and I could feel the intentions. I loved all your description and I especially love how you ended it; not too sexual, but not off topic.
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Sweet!
I love this! Hits very close to home. Simple yet great
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