life weary and hearts closed
these unseeing strangers,
passing silently through
streets of alone
unaware of shadow dancers
reflecting souls of youth
seizing the moment,
to waltz in tune
to each other's
long forgotten beat
Author notes
Picture found through Goggle.com
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by Manda Kathryn.
600 points, ended July 8, 2008, 14 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Gorgeous!
This took me on a dance that touched my heart and just made me sigh softly
♥
Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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Thank you so much for the honor of Gold.
Juls
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i think thatz an amazing adaption of the picture as you graced it with loving tones from within the souls of what could be lovers from strangers. good luck, DARK.
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i really love the take you have used on this prompt, i love the "waltz in tune to each other's forgotten beat" this is beautiful, good luck in the contest and keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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like it
its nice nd i like this phrase
"unaware of shadow dancers
reflecting souls of youth" very nice one -
hmmmmmmmmmm, came to comment, but see nothing at the moment. may your muse strike you in the tip of the pen and ink spill wonderful words for your entry. good luck in the contest, DARK.
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lol, all done now
Thanks for stopping by.
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