Don't try to fix me
I am not broken
I'm not sure if you can see
But in this life I'm choking
I try to hide the way I feel
So sometimes what you see is not real
You can not make me better
I'm not even broken at all
I'm not going to leave a suicide letter
And I'm sorry I didn't give you a call
Author notes
11.You cannot fix that which is not broken.
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A contest entry
- 20 Titles and Quotes by Travel Notes.
600 points, ended July 15, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Be kinder than necessary, for everyone you meet is fighting some kind of battle!
Comments
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Whoaaa. Beautiful. I can relate to this so well, and I loved the picture you put along with this. My favorite lines were the first 4; and I loved the rhyming and how it wasn't forced at all
Incredible. Keep writing & best of luck to you in that contest ! ♥
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