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Goodbye

I'm walking away,
And not coming back,
I've had enough,
Of your lies.

I've been back stabbed,
So many times,
I'm now bleeding,
Through my chest.

My hearts fallen out,
Through this black hole,
It's on the floor,
And it's being trampled,
By your deceit.

I've fallen down,
And I'm not getting up,
I'm crawling away,
Waiting for the kick,
To connect with my side.

I've found a dark corner,
Away from your,
Disapproving eyes,
I'm on my own,
Bleeding to death,
Your friendship
Has killed me,
Brought me to my knees,
I just hope,
No one can find me.

Because I deserve to die.

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I'm sick of all this shit. I don't care what they think. I'm leaving and not coming back....

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  • EntombedCrystalRose
    July 2, 2008

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    Deeply Truthful

    No-ones opinion should ever be forced upon another. I am sorry that you are having to put up with such issues as this... if you want someone to talk to, feel free to message me
    Never feel you are the only one with issues, and are isolated because of them. There are always others here to help

  • hardeepb
    July 1, 2008

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    Wow

    I know exactly how you feel. You don't know how badly. Lies cause destruction to a person's mental and a dangerous strain on a relationship. I'm living the after-effects of this right now in my life. Excellent write, I love this piece.

    "My hearts fallen out,
    Through this black hole,
    It's on the floor,
    And it's being trampled,
    By your deceit."

    I've felt this recently...as you can read from my work but it has subsided quite a bit. Thank you for this write, it touched me deeply. 9/10!


  • innocence jaded.xx
    July 1, 2008

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    Ahhh wow. What a powerful poem. And hey, you don't deserve to die. If you ever need someone to vent to or talk to, know I'm here !! This is a captivating and intense piece of poetry. Keep writing ♥

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