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Reverie's Cradle

Missing image

Fancy never wrinkles,

soul doesn't suffer arthritis,

passion's fire

gives mind's eyes

winged sight

regardless of time's gravity.

 

Heart passes yesteryear's

desire's graffiti

remembers taste of lust's ice cream,

and hunger that brought thunder to bones.

 

Wandering in withering steps,

ever immortal in brain,

child rocked in reverie's cradle,

never forgets creativity's rhythm,

especially when heart feels echoes

strolling places  

once flowing with gratification's fount

but now are dream's cemetery.

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    July 8, 2008

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    Deeply creative and enchanting, this is a wonderful flow of imagery and emotions

    ♥
    Thank you & Best of luck
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • DolphinLass silver member
    July 2, 2008
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    wow very expressive write ..best of luck


  • theDARK1 gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    very passionate and descriptive take on the picture at hand. i can see your pen was super creative as your words were inked in a fine line. good luck in the contest, DARK.


  • xXDarkChildXx
    July 1, 2008

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    brilliant use of words. I must say, you are a great writer. I love reading a lot of your work. I wish you the best of luck in this contest. I hope to read more of your stuff later.