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Riot

We will never have mercy for you
The way you make us feel
Empty, used, let down, stepped on
We are together
We will not back down from our problems, from our enemies
We are not alone
Creating a riot sounds good
It'll help us get the world back
Make the world pay for hurting us
We all are angry, pissed off, in pain
Watch out world, her we come with a riot.

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Riot - Three days grace. This is for a contest. empty, used, let down, stepped on, back down, a riot, angry, pissed off, pain are from the lyrics. of the song.

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  • Dovina
    July 18, 2008

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    Three Days Grace is one of my favorite bands, and Riot is one of my fav songs of theirs. I usually don't like when people use the name of the song for their actual title, but you made it work. You had a nice way of incorporating words from the lyrics into your poem. I can feel a lot of emotion, the actual wanting to create a riot along with anger against the worl.d nice write, and thanks for your entry.